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I need some people to go through the tutorials I am working on and minimize the text and also make it more readable.

Less is better in this case. I want to explain things as SHORT as possible. It needs work.


The text is here: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/ ... sp=sharing

Ignore the code around it, just edit the obvious text. Post here if you are working on it. I 'really' need this done by someone 8) Feel free to modify as you want. Plox halp.

Hearts if you do.

Am working on this.

edit: won't be done in 1 night that's a lot of text lol

Folder wrote:Am working on this.

edit: won't be done in 1 night that's a lot of text lol

Cool. that's NP, thanks for the assistance 8)

Everything is edited, hopefully I didn't miss anything but it's quite a lot of text. I didn't add any lines because I need to see it in action - I'm a bit more visual with some things.

Thanks dude. 8) Will see about this soon.